Lecture
Sheet 13: Order Letter
ENG 213:
Advanced English Communication
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
Lecture Sheet 12: Legal Notice Sample
ENG 213:
Advanced English Communication
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
Legal
Notice
From: Md.
Kamal Hossain
Advocate
Bangladesh
Supreme Court
For and
on behalf of:
Bank
Asia, Motijheel Branch, Dhaka. ……Notice Giver
To: Mr.
Md. Hannan Sarker
Managing
Director
Basundhara
Limited
12
Panthapath, Dhaka 1208………..Notice Receiver
Subject:
Legal Notice under Section 138 of Negotiable Instrument Act, 1881
(Act xxvi of 1881) and The Negotiable Instruments (Amendment) Act,
2006
Dear Sir:
Being
instructed by my client I do hereby give you this Legal Notice as
follows:
1. That
you the notice receiver and client of the above bank and Managing
Director,
Basundhara
Limited,12 Panthapath, Dhaka 1208 had taken loan facility from my
above mentioned client bank from their sanction advice memo no INV
148/145-876/765-2330 dated 9th July 2001.
2.
That in transaction in between you, for realization of bank
dues in relating to Basundhara Limited , you the notice receiver have
issued Cheque No. 54378945
dated
17.06.07 of One Bank Limited, Kamal Ataturk Avenue Branch, Dhaka for
taka fifteen million(15,00,00,000) only in favour of Bank Asia,
Gulshan Branch , Dhaka for adjustment of the account of Basundhara
Limited and the same cheque was produced before the concerned bank
for encashment but the cheque was dishonoured on July 18, 2007 due to
insufficient fund.
3. That
under the above circumstances on behalf of my client I do hereby give
you this legal notice to make the payment of the amount of the said
cheque within 30 days from the date of receiving this legal notice
/publishing in the newspaper. In case of default my client will be
bound to take necessary legal action against you in the proper court
after completing its essential steps.
An exact
copy of this legal notice is kept in my office for future reference
and necessary action.
Thanking
you
Md. Kamal
Hossain
Advocate,
Bangladesh Supreme Court
30
Dhanmondi, Road 10/A, Dhaka.
Phone:
9334567, 01716046236
Lecture Sheet 11: Resignation Letter
ENG
213: Advanced English Communication
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
Resignation
Letter
Positive Resignation:
Negative Resignation:
Lecture
Sheet 10: Job Rejection Letter
ENG
213: Advanced English Communication
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
Rejection
Letter
Job
Rejection
This
situation is difficult. If you know the job is a mismatch for your
skills, be honest and then act to remedy the situation. Your
integrity and credibility will expand with this letter.
174
Bittersweet St.
Broken
Arrow, OK 74012
January
18, 20XX
Carroll
Connell, Director
Intercomp,
Inc.
P.
O. Box 23659
Tulsa,
OK 74133
Dear
Ms. Connell:
The
position of executive drafting assistant sounds exciting. Thank you
for considering me. However, I cannot accept this offer in good
conscience at this time. The computer expertise this position
requires for success demands more experience than I currently have. I
want to do an
excellent
job; therefore, I am enrolling in a CAD course at Tulsa University.
In four months I will have the training to pursue a similar position
with determination. Perhaps TU instructors can suggest names of
recent students who are prepared now to accept the responsibilities
of the job. Someone better trained than I is waiting to discover
Intercomp.
Thank
you again for thinking of me. It has been the incentive I needed to
get the extra training I must have to continue in the drafting field.
I intend to be prepared for the next executive drafting assistant
opening as your company continues to expand its operation.
Sincerely,
Signature
Chris
Jensen
Not
Accepting Possible Job Offer
This
letter is positive and suggests a continuing business relationship in
the future.
June
23, 20XX
Veronica
Black
President
Quinta
Exploration
P.O.
Box 1312
Phoenix,
AZ 85029
Dear
Veronica:
Thank
you for your letter notifying me that I am one of your final
candidates for the position of Corporate Vice President. I certainly
enjoyed meeting with you Tuesday, touring the company and learning
more about the goals of your Board. However, as we discussed at our
meeting, my priority has been to settle on the East Coast, and I have
continued to pursue opportunities. Recently, I received an offer in
my field of hydrogeology, located within a day’s drive of the coast
and in proximity to family members. With the responsibilities that
are inherent in the position and the future that it promises, I have
accepted the offer.
I
hope that we meet again, perhaps at the national conference next
summer. Since it is scheduled for Atlanta, I can promise you a tour
of the city.
Thank
you again for the fine day at Quinta Exploration.
Sincerely,
Signature
Janet
T. Lundquist
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Lecture Sheet 9: Acceptance Letter
ENG 213: Advanced English Communication
Instructor: Md. Jamal Hossain
Acceptance Letter
The acceptance of a job offer is one of the most pleasant letters to write. Your contact at the company
should have sent you a written job offer that briefly reaffirms the offer. This is their way of completing the legal contract between you and the company. It is your responsibility to confirm that you understand the details of the offer. This letter could also be used if the elements of the offer were not clearly stated.
Use it to request clarification in your acceptance letter and state explicitly what you are agreeing to.
This part is particularly important if critical items are not mentioned in the offer letter or remain vague, as often happens if the offer is made verbally.
What do you include?
- Thank the company for the offer.
- Accept the position.
- Restate the terms of your contract. These may include salary, benefits, location and others
- Restate any instructions given to you by the company. These might include your start date or the hours you will be working.
- State your happiness at joining the company.
This is a sample acceptance letter to give you an idea on how to write your own letter, the phrases in
italics, should be replaced by your own information.
[Employer's Address]
Dear [Recruiter Name],
After having considered your offer for [Position title] at [Organisation title] it is with great enthusiasm
that I accept your offer. This job opportunity fits with my career expectations and path and I therefore look forward to contributing to the success of [Organisation title].
As we discussed, my starting salary will be [salary here] and health and life insurance benefits will be
[describe here].
I have handed in my notice form my current job, the notice period being [notice period length].
I look forward to start [work / training course] on the [starting date]. If you need any additional
documents please let me know.
Again, thank you.
Sincerely,
[sign your name ]
[type your name ]
Jane Fieldstone
87 Washington Street
Smithfield, CA 08055
(909) 555-5555
Date
Dear Mr. Barnes,
As we discussed on the phone, I am very pleased to accept the position of Marketing
Manager with Smithfield Pottery. Thank you for the opportunity. I am eager to make a
positive contribution to the company and to work with everyone on the Smithfield team.
2As we discussed, my starting salary will be $35,000 and health and life insurance benefits
will be provided after 90 days of employment.
I look forward to starting employment on July 1, 2007. If there is any additional
information or paperwork you need prior to then, please let me know.
Again, thank you.
Sincerely,
Signature
Jane Fieldstone
7 Shawnee Road
Short Hills, NJ 07078
201-555-0303
Mrs. Walter Mellish
Greenley Corp., Inc.
1010 Madison Avenue
New York, NY
Dear Mrs. Mellish:
It was certainly wonderful news when you called this afternoon to offer me the position
as assistant buyer for Greenley Corp. Please consider this letter my formal acceptance.
I am pleased to accept your offer at a salary of $29,000 annually.
As we agreed, my starting date will be July 28 to enable me to finish a summer computer
class that will enhance my skills for Greenley Corp.
I also understand that I will receive full company pay and benefits during the 12-week
training program and that I am considered probationary during that time.
Thank you again, Mrs. Mellish, for offering me this wonderful opportunity, and do let me
know if I can do anything in advance of my start date to facilitate the paperwork, or if
there are any areas you'd like me to be reading up on.
What a delight it will be to work with you and the Greenley team!
Sincerely,
Jane Oakley
Lecture Sheet 10: Job Rejection
Lecture Sheet 9: Acceptance Letter
Lecture Sheet 8: The Basics of Business Letter
Name
Title
Company
Street Address
City, Postcode
Dear Mr. /Ms.:
I am pleased to accept your invitation to become an engineer for the Arthur
Manufacturing Company at the monthly salary of $xxx. I am certain that the duties
assigned to me will be interesting and challenging.
Thank you for your offer of assistance in finding housing in Pittsburgh. This will make
my relocation much easier.
I look forward to my future association with Arthur Manufacturing. As advised in your
letter, I will report to your office at 8:30 a.m. on (date).
Sincerely,
(Handwritten signature)
Your name, typed
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Lecture
Sheet 8: Basics of Business Letters
ENG
213: Advanced English Communication
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
The Basics of Business Letters
Why
should you write a business letter?
You
are busy no matter what your position. Since you are busy, you want
to use your time as effectively as possible. The business letter
takes time but can be written more quickly if you follow a few basic
principles. Keep in mind these three points when you write a letter:
1.
Business letters serve one purpose.
2.
Business letters are expensive.
3.
Business letters serve as a record.
Business
letters serve one purpose: They communicate information. Countless
hours are spent, and too many letters are sent that say little or
nothing. That’s a waste of time for the sender and the receiver.
Also, when the wages of the writer and the typist — along with the
prorated cost of equipment and postage — are figured in, business
letters are expensive. It is important that they be cost-effective.
Why write a business letter? Because business letters serve as a
record. Letters are long-lasting, tangible evidence of
information you communicate to others.
What
should you consider about style?
Style
is how you write the letter. Business letters used to be written in
what might be called “businessese,” a formal, stiff language.
That is no longer true. The predominant style is matter-of- fact and
conversational. Gone are such phrases as “the aforementioned” and
“due to the fact that.” Our high-tech, impersonal society
requires business professionals to be more personable in their
written communication in order to be more effective. The Seven “C’s”
of Style will help you become more effective.
The
Seven “C’s” of Style
1.
Conversational. Write the way you
speak. Get rid of stilted phrases. Why say “due to the fact that”
when you can say “because”? Would you normally say “the
aforementioned information”?
Why not “the information” or, if you need to refer to a point,
“the previous information”?
2.
Clarity. The goal of clarity is that the reader understands
precisely what you are saying. The language of your letter should be
adapted to the recipient. This means that you
write in a matter-of-fact, conversational tone. Use specific examples
the reader can relate to. Don’t assume that your reader understands
the jargon of your trade. Remember, most letters will be read by
people other than the recipient of the letter. These people may be
unfamiliar with the technical language or jargon you use. Clarity
also means organizing your letter so each paragraph deals with only
one main idea and presenting your ideas in a logical order. Your
letter should not be a collection of random ideas. It should be
single-minded in its purpose.
3.
Concise. A concise letter eliminates all unnecessary words. Why
use four words, “in as much as,” when you can use one word,
“because”? This is not to say that you can’t write long
letters, but the longer the letter, the more ineffective it becomes.
It is better to write a short letter with attachments than a long,
detailed one. Short letters are read and remembered; long letters are
skimmed and filed.
4.
Complete. Make sure you have included all the information the
reader needs to know. (Don’t include details that are interesting
but not relevant.) The biggest problem with leaving out information
is that the reader has to make assumptions. For example, don’t say,
“When we last spoke about the situation,” when you can say, “When
we spoke on June 8 about hiring a new administrative assistant.”
Remember that the reader can’t read your mind. The reader can only
guess at what you left out.
5.
Concrete. Use specific terms that cannot be misunderstood. Don’t
say, “The large order that we requested has not arrived.” Say,
“The order for 10,000 basins that we requested on May 3, 20XX, has
not arrived as of June 20.” Identify names and numbers.
Write
about what people can count or do. Include what people can see,
touch, smell, taste or hear. In other words, make your language
tangible. Make it concrete.
6.
Constructive. Use words and phrases that set a positive tone.
Constructive words are like smiling when you greet someone. They
leave a good impression. Words such as “failure,”
“you neglected” and “error” tend to distance the recipient
from the writer. Words such as “agreeable,” “proud” and
“success” help create a positive tone.
7.
Correct. The last step in writing any business letter is to
proofread it. You automatically check your image in a mirror before
going out or meeting someone. The letter you send is your image on
paper. If it is riddled with spelling, grammatical and typographical
errors, it will detract from what you are trying to get across. The reaction
will be, “He can’t spell,” or “She doesn’t know how to
type.” If you have a secretary, don’t assume your secretary knows
how to spell or punctuate. Luckily, most do, but proof your own
letters. Why? Because it is your name that is signed at the bottom of
the page, not your secretary’s. You will be the one who looks bad.
In
a nutshell
Writing
a business letter need not be difficult as long as you remember that
you are communicating with another business person just like
yourself. If you incorporate Subject, Audience, Purpose and
Style/Organization into your correspondence, you will
be on the road to better business letter writing.
Parts
of a Business Letter
There
are many parts to the business letter — some required, some
optional. This chapter will review those parts and their order. The
parts of the business letter follow:
1.
Letterhead or Heading
2.
Date
3.
File Number (optional)
4.
Confidential (optional)
5.
Inside Address
6.
Attention Line (optional)
7.
Salutation (optional)
8.
Subject Line (optional)
9.
Body of the Letter
10.
Complimentary Close (optional)
11.
Signature
12.
Added Information (optional)
13.
Postscript (optional)
14.
Mailing Instructions (optional)
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Letterhead
Most
business letters originating from a firm are written on the firm’s
letterhead. If you are writing a personal business letter or your
firm does not use letterhead, then you need to include your firm’s
address in the heading.
Date
When
you are using a heading instead of letterhead, place the date on the
first line and the address on the subsequent lines as follows:
September
9, 20XX (USA format)/ 9 September 9, 20XX (European format)
359
Longview Road
Mt.
Vernon, IL 65676
This
should be the date the letter is written. Be sure to write out the
month and to include both the date and year for adequate reference.
File
Number
On
occasion, you may wish to include the file number of the project,
case or order that the letter refers to. The file number should be
physically separated from the date by two spaces and from the part
that follows (Confidential or Inside Address) by two spaces.
Confidential
Use
this word when the person to whom the letter is addressed is the only
one who should read the letter. Physically separate the word from the
rest of the letter by two lines. To assure confidentiality, include
the word “Confidential” on the envelope.
Inside
Address
This
should include the name of the person you are writing, the person’s
title (if available), the name of the firm and the firm’s address.
Attention
Line
This
is used when you do not know the name of the person you are writing
and the letter is addressed to the firm. For example, the attention
line may say, “Attention: Head of Accounting.” It may also be
used when you know the name of the person you are writing
but are unsure of the title. The attention line may say, “Attention:
Customer Service,” thus indicating to the person receiving the
letter that the letter also needs to be routed to the customer
service department. Another way of doing this is to use the attention
line and send copies of the letter to the appropriate department.
Salutation
The
salutation is used in all formats except the Simplified Letter and
the Memo. The following are salutations used in American business
letters:
•
Dear Sir:
•
Dear Madam: (may be followed by title, such as Dear
Madam Chairperson:)
•
Gentlemen:
•
Ladies:
•
Dear Mr. Bryan:
•
Dear Ms. Gray:
•
Ladies and Gentlemen:
•
Dear Personnel Director: (a gender-free title)
•
To Whom It May Concern: or TO WHOM IT MAY
CONCERN:
(use this form as a last resort)
Caution:
You must determine the appropriate choice, given your reader and
the situation. If you are uncertain about your reader’s gender,
avoid assuming gender in the salutation. Use your reader’s name
whenever you know it. Researchers discovered that people are
more
likely to read a letter with their names in the salutation. One of
the problems you may run into is writing to a person with a name that
is not gender specific; for example, the name Terry. The simplest
solution in the salutation is to say, “Dear Terry Lucas.” If you
are addressing a group of people in general, such as the shipping
department, do not assume they are all male. The old “Gentlemen:”
is not acceptable. “Shipping Agents:” is preferred. The way
around having to use a salutation when you are unsure of whom you are
writing is to use the Simplified Letter.
Simplified
Letter
This
is useful when you do not know the title of the person you are
writing to or when you are writing to a company, government agency or
organization. It eliminates the courtesy titles (Mr., Mrs., Ms.,
Dr.), the salutations and the complimentary close. The focus of the
letter is on the body and what is to be said. The spacing is the same
as the block format.
Italics
Unlimited
231
W. 40th Street • Camden, NJ 08618 • (623) 555-2678
August
10, 20XX
Terry
Lancaster
Capital
Supply
657
Minden Ct.
Des
Moines, Iowa 54687
SUBJECT:
PRINTING SUPPLIES
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Signature
Joan
McAllister
JFM:eer
Subject
Line
The
subject line is most commonly used in the Simplified Letter. It
announces the subject of the letter and provides a summary of your
intent.
Body
of the Letter
This
is where you make requests, provide information or reasons or reply
to someone. It is the main part of the business letter.
Complimentary
Close
This
varies in formality and is found in all business letters with the
exception of the Simplified Letter and the Memo (see Simplified
Letter for its placement). The following complimentary closes
are
in order of decreasing formality:
•
Very truly yours,
•
Respectfully,
•
Sincerely yours,
•
Cordially,
•
Sincerely,
The
most appropriate, in general situations, is the last.
Signature
There
should be four lines between the complimentary close (or the body in
the Simplified Letter) and your typed name so there is room for your
signature.
Additional
Information
If
needed, this consists of the sender’s initials in capital letters
followed by a colon, followed by the typist’s initials in small
letters. You may also find the abbreviations “Enc.” for enclosure
and “cc:” or “xc:” for copies sent, followed by names of
persons
receiving
the copies.
Postscript
The
“P.S.” highlights additional information that might have been
placed in the letter but for some reason was not. Often used in
sales, promotional or personal letters, the postscript can emphasize
a request for action or consideration. It is often the first thing
the recipient reads. Use it to entice or motivate your reader.
Postscripts are especially effective in sales or form letters.
Mailing
Instructions
Use
these to give the reader deadlines or pertinent information on
mailing a reply.
As
you look through the major formats, it’s obvious that many of the
parts listed above are not necessarily used in routine business
correspondence. However, it helps to be aware of all of them in case
you need to use any of them.
DAVID
S. DOUGLAS
3166
LOGAN TERRACE
Glasgow,
KENTUCKY 42141
606-555-8826
CAREER OBJECTIVE
Position in motel/restaurant management with
opportunity for advancement.
EXPERIENCE
6.92 - Present Mando's
Italian Food, 4023 Summer Avenue, Glasgow,
KY 42141.
Duties: Worked as cook six nights a week (about 45
hours a week).
Responsible for closing restaurant Mondays through
Thursdays.
7/90 - 5/90 Red Apple Inn, 611 Madison Avenue,
Glasgow, KY 42141.
Duties: Worked as waiter
(about 25 hours a week) while attending State Technical Institute.
6/88 - 5/90 U. S. Army, Fort
Polk, LA 71459. Attained rank of sergeant.
9/87 - 5/88 Oscoc's Grocery, 4070 Willow Street,
Neon, KY 41840.
Duties: Did general grocery duties including
stocking shelves, arranging displays, and serving customers.
EDUCATION
9/90 - 5/92 State Technical Institute, Glasgow, IY
42141, Received Associate of Science degree in Motel/Restaurant
Management.
9/85 - 6/88 Memorial High School, Neon, KY 41840.
Graduate in top 15 percent of class.
ACTIVITIES
ROTC officer at State (two years). Photographer for
college yearbook. President of high school senior class. Captain
of high school basketball team.
REFERENCES
Mr. James P. Lucchesi Ms.
Lena Jensen
Owner, Mando's Italian Food Manager, Red Apple Inn
4023 Summer Avenue 611 Madison Avenue
Glasgow, KY 42141 Glasgow, KY 42141
606-555-8361 606-555-4492
Mr. William B. Champion,
Division Head
General-Vocational Technologies
State Technical Institute
Glasgow, KY 42141
606-555-4468
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This
resume illustrates a chronological style. David Douglas stresses his
work experience by listing it first.
CHRONOLOGICAL
RÉSUMÉ
This
style gives information in reverse chronological order with dates. It
is the easiest to write and prepare and works best for people with a
steady employment background. Personnel people like this style best.
The resumes above illustrate this style.
FUNCTIONAL
RÉSUMÉ
This
style highlights skills and qualifications. Because it does not
include dates or places of employment, it is convenient for hiding
breaks in employment of frequent job changes. This style also works
well for the person who is shifting career focus and who wants to
emphasize skills rather than job titles.
JOYCE
M. KRAMER
405
Churchill Street
Blencoe,
Iowa 51523
CAREER
OBJECTIVE: An office position using my
Secretarial Administration training with the
opportunity for
advancement.
EDUCATION:
DeSoto County Junior College, Middleton,
Iowa 52638, 1990-1992
Associate of Arts Degree, June 1992, 3.82 GAP
Major: Secretarial Administration
Special Skills: Typing
75 words a minute
Shorthand Dictation - 100
words a minute
Educational Highlights: Business English, Business
Correspondence,
Word
Processing Applications, Records
Management,
Accounting, Economics
Activities and Honors: Phi Theta (College
scholastic honor society)
Phi Beta
Lambda (business students organization)
Central High School, Blevins, Iowa, 1987 - 1990
Ranked fifth in graduating class
Activities and Honors: National Honor Society
Gregg
Shorthand Award
Future
Business Leaders of America
EXPERIENCE: First State
Bank, 501 Union Avenue, Middleton, Iowa 52638, 19901992
Part-time Secretary to Mr. James
Brown, Vice President of Marketing
Duties: Typing, taking dictation,
filing, answering telephone
LeBonheur Children's
Hospital, 848 Adams avenue, Blevins, Iowa 50000, 1988-1990
Candy Striper Volunteer
Duties: Attending patients, under
supervision of Miss Mary Greene, Head Nurse
REFERENCES
Dr Carolyn Bowlin
Mr Edward Jamison
Chairperson
Instructor
Department of Secretarial administration
Department of Accounting
DeSoto
County Junior College
DeSoto County Junior College
Middleton,
Iowa 52638
Middleton, Iowa 52638
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Joyce
Kramer's resume illustrates a chronological style. She stresses her
education by listing it first.
COMBINATION
RESUME
This
style combines aspects of the chronological and the functional
resume. The experience block is divided into two sections: (1) job
skills and qualifications, followed by (2) dates and places of
employment. This style is especially effective when you've had
several jobs with similar job duties, because it allows you to
eliminate, repetition and to prepare a more concise resume. This
style is illustrated on pages 261 and 262.
SUMMARY
OF QUALIFICATIONS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Although
you will use your resume primarily when applying for a job, you may
also use it when you are
SHIRLEY
A. KESTER
407
Sheridan Street
Danville,
H 61832
217-555-8213
CAREER OBJECTIVE: A
medical secretarial position with a goal to become an
Accredited Records Technician.
EDUCATION: Danville Area
Community College, 2000 East Main Street,
Danville, Illinois 61832. To be graduated in May
with an
1/90 - 5/92 Associate of Applied Science degree,
Medical Secretary Major
and a Certificate in Computer programming.
EDUCATION HIGHLIGHTS:
Medical Terminology Medical Transcription
Physiology/Anatomy Records Management
Payroll
Accounting Word Processing
Business
Correspondence Accounting Principles
Secretarial
Systems and Procedures
Computer programming Languages
FORTRAN,
COBOL - I and II, RPG - ASSEMBLER
Office
Equip It
Skills
Software Computer Equipment
WordPerfect, dBase, IBM, Apple,
Lotus 1-2-3 PageMaker,
Macintosh
MacWrite.
QUALIFICATION Ten
years in service-related positions. Extensive interaction
SUMMARY with
public and responsibility for service-related records.
ADMINISTRATIVE: Supervising
telephone surveyors
Setting up file system of potential clients
Planning areas to be surveyed
Plotting maps of survey area
ADMINISTRATIVE Filing
reference information
ASSISTANT: Typing
reference cards and correspondence
Ordering and controlling supplies
Making customers' appointments
Answering telephones
Greeting customers
RETAIL SALES: Keeping
sales records
Taking inventory
Pricing merchandise
Selling merchandise
Operating several types of cash registers.
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Shirley
Kester's resume illustrates a combination style. It would become a
functional resume if the places and dates of employment were omitted
(and it would fit on one page.)
The
signature line and the date line personalize the resume. Some
employers like these optional additions.
ENG 213:
Advanced English Communication
Lecture
Sheet 6: Job Application
Instructor:
Md. Jamal Hossain
What is a job application?
A job
application is a medium through which a person can sell
himself/herself to a job market, particularly to an employer.
Therefore it is very important for a job seeker to take special care
of his job application. Because a good application is the
pre-requisite for an applicant to get a call for an interview.Now write an application in response to the above advertisement.
Four
Considerations of a Business Letter
The
four areas you must take into consideration for each business letter
are listed below. If you do not consider each one of them, your
letter will be ineffective.
1.
Subject
2.
Audience
3.
Purpose
4.
Style/Organization
Subject
Every
piece of writing — from the business letter to the novel —
revolves around a subject. Luckily, in the business world the subject
is usually specific. Quite often it is supplied for you by someone
else, such as a boss or colleague, or demanded by a situation such as
hiring or congratulating an employee.
It’s a fact: The more
specific your subject, the easier it is to write your letter. For
example, let’s say that you need to request information about an
order that did not arrive when it should have. If you are in charge
of the account, writing the letter is easy. If you are not in charge
of the account, it is harder fo
- Block style
- Modified block style
- Modified semi-block style
- Block style
- Modified block style
- Modified semi-block style
- Semi-block style
- Semi-block style
Audience
This
area is tricky because you may not know your audience. If you do, you
can tailor your letter to that audience. Many times, however, your
audience is larger than you expect. Your letter may
be
addressed to Terry Smith but may be read by several other people in
Terry’s firm to receive the action you wish. If you are unsure of
your audience, assume they are educated, reasonable
people
until you find out otherwise. Don’t assume they have as much
knowledge of the subject of your letter as you do, or you may
overgeneralize or forget to include important details.
Purpose
Many
letters are sent with a specific subject and audience in mind but are
not clear in their purpose.
Know
why you are sending the letter
- Block style
- Modified block style
- Modified semi-block style
- Semi-block style
- Block style
- Modified block style
- Modified semi-block style
- Semi-block style
Style/Organization
The
first three areas dictate the content, direction and emphasis of the
letter.
1.
Know WHAT you’re writing about — SUBJECT.
2.
Know WHO you’re writing for — AUDIENCE.
3.
Know WHY you’re writing — PURPOSE.
Now
you are ready to be concerned with HOW you are going to write the
letter. The first three areas can be determined in a matter of
minutes if you are familiar with the ideas that need to be
communicated. The fourth area — style and organization — takes
more time.
Organization Part 1 of Body states your purpose. Part 2 of Body explains what you want to happen or explains the information you have. Part 3 of Body requests a dated action, conclude or thank the reader for his response. Notice that these are parts or sections rather than paragraphs.
Part 1 of Body states
your purpose. Part 2 of Body explains what you want to happen or
explains the
information you have. Part 3 of Body requests a dated action,
conclude or
thank the reader for
his response. Notice that these are parts or sections rather than
paragraphs.
In
some cases, particularly Part 2, the parts may consist of more than
one paragraph. Let’s take a look at each of these parts.Now write an application in response to the above advertisement.
Part
1 of the Body
Get
right to the point in the first sentence of the letter. When you read
a novel, you expect to have background information before the story
ever starts. When you read a business letter, you expect to be told
immediately what will happen. Remember, your reader doesn’t have
any more time to wade through a long letter than you do. This part is
usually a short paragraph. Anything too long will
cause
the reader to lose patience.
Part
2 of the Body
This
is the bread and butter of the letter. It explains the information
you are giving, or it explains what you want the recipient to do. It
doesn’t need to be elaborate, but it does need to include all of
the information the recipient needs. If you have a lot of
information, break it into short paragraphs,
make
a list or refer to an attachment. Underlining essential information
is one way to highlight key points for your reader. Your letter
should be organized to help the recipient understand what to know or
what to do.
Part
3 of the Body
This,
like the first part, is usually a short paragraph. In writing
classes, it’s called the clincher — not a bad way to remember its
function. Depending on the purpose of your letter, it will do one of
three things.
1.
Conclude. In
an informational letter, this allows you to point out the most
important item or draw all your key points into one statement.
2.
Request action. In
letters that require a response, such as collection letters, you
define the action you want the recipient to take. In this part, you
tell the reader what to do and when to do it. Being vague gets vague
results. Be specific.
3.
Thank the reader. In
some letters, this part is simply a thank you for the recipient’s
attention, response or concern.
After you
have decided your purpose you can start writing. Your application
must contain the following parts:
- Date and address of the person written to (May 9, 2007/The Managing Director/ Asiana Land Project………………..)
- Subject ( Application for the post of Site Engineer)
- Salutation ( Dear Sir/ Madam, Dear Mr Hossain)
- Body (Source of advertisement; your qualifications; hope of getting a call for viva, etc)
- Subscription (Sincerely Yours, Sincerely, etc)
- Signature of the applicant (MZ Karim)
While
writing the body of your letter you may start with a summary of your
qualifications. Give reference of your application. Try to arrange
your qualifications and experience following the sequence of
requirements given in the advertisement. If there are no particular
requirements mentioned, arrange your information as you think to be
fruitful.
While
writing your job application you can follow any of the following four
formats:
- Block style
- Modified block style
- Modified semi-block style
- Semi-block styleSome examples of job applications:Requesting AppointmentThis letter asks for an appointment to discuss future employment. It offers enough information to interest the reader but does not give the detail of a resumé.November 10, 20XXMr. Robert J. HunterDirector, Internal CommunicationsUnited Telephone, Inc.P.O. Box 3245Winston Salem, NC 27106Subject: Application for the post of a Communication SpecialistDear Mr. Hunter:John Stewart, your director of public relations, told me that you were looking for a communications specialist. I am a recent graduate of Richmond University and would like the opportunity to talk with you about the position.My degree is in journalism, and my intern work during my senior year was on the community desk at the Kansas City Star. The summer of 20XX I assisted the editor of the St. JosephHospital newsletter and was responsible for writing the articles and taking pictures.May I have an appointment to discuss my qualifications and my interest in working with you as a communications specialist? I will call your office Wednesday morning for a time that is convenient for you.Sincerely,SignatureJoan Eldon WilliamsSolicited ApplicationAlthough the employer initiates contact in this situation, the job seeker must respond with a personal sales pitch, such as this sample letter.77 Longmeadow Ave.Tulsa, OK 74135August 3, 20XXDavid FronteVice PresidentProfessional Chemical Institute864 ManhattanPittsburg, KS 66762Subject: Application for the post of Product DeveloperDear Mr. Fronte:Thank you for your telephone call this morning requesting my application for Product Developer. I am pleased that ourNovember 10, 20XXMr. Robert J. HunterDirector, Internal CommunicationsUnited Telephone, Inc.P.O. Box 3245Winston Salem, NC 27106Subject: Application for the post of a Communication SpecialistDear Mr. Hunter:John Stewart, your director of public relations, told me that you were looking for a communications specialist. I am a recent graduate of Richmond University and would like the opportunity to talk with you about the position.My degree is in journalism, and my intern work during my senior year was on the community desk at the Kansas City Star. The summer of 20XX I assisted the editor of the St. JosephHospital newsletter and was responsible for writing the articles and taking pictures.May I have an appointment to discuss my qualifications and my interest in working with you as a communications specialist? I will call your office Wednesday morning for a time that is convenient for you.Sincerely,SignatureJoan Eldon WilliamsSolicited ApplicationAlthough the employer initiates contact in this situation, the job seeker must respond with a personal sales pitch, such as this sample letter.77 Longmeadow Ave.Tulsa, OK 74135August 3, 20XXDavid FronteVice PresidentProfessional Chemical Institute864 ManhattanPittsburg, KS 66762Subject: Application for the post of Product DeveloperDear Mr. Fronte:Thank you for your telephone call this morning requesting my application for Product Developer. I am pleased that our friend, Kelly Greene, spoke so highly of me.Your call came at an opportune time in my career. I am encouraged that your company’s direction may be the very avenue I have sought for several new product ideas. Your goal of a 10 percent increase in products during the next two years is a challenge I am ready toaccept.I am eager to discuss this potential growth with you next Wednesday in your office at 2:15 p.m. as you suggested in our conversation today. In the meantime, please call me at XXX-555-9975 should you need additional information prior to our meeting.Thank you again for your interest.Sincerely,SignatureBrad Reed friend, Kelly Greene, spoke so highly of me.Your call came at an opportune time in my career. I am encouraged that your company’s direction may be the very avenue I have sought for several new product ideas. Your goal of a 10 percent increase in products during the next two years is a challenge I am ready toaccept.I am eager to discuss this potential growth with you next Wednesday in your office at 2:15 p.m. as you suggested in our conversation today. In the meantime, please call me at XXX-555-9975 should you need additional information prior to our meeting.Thank you again for your interest.Sincerely,SignatureBrad ReedCareer with leader in ICTBashundhara ICT Limited, an ISO certified company is looking for some Computer Engineers for its Dhaka office. The applicant should possess a Bachelor degree in Computer Engineering with minimum five years’ experience as a Computer Engineer in a large textile company.Job Requirements:
- Should be capable to handle overall activities of the company.
- Strong leadership skill to manage internal and external people effectively.
- Identify strength and weakness of employees and plan training and monitoring accordingly.
- Work effectively under pressure and stress in a fast paced environment.
- Should possess multifaceted abilities and strong interpersonal skills.
Benefits:We offer attractive salary package with other admissible benefits.Interested candidates are requested to apply along with their CV and two copies of recent passport size color photographs by May 15, 2007. Write to:DirectorHuman Resources DivisionBasundhara ICTP Ltd18 Tejgaon Industrial AeaDhaka-1215.Now write an application in response to the above advertisement.

